​The Admissions Narrative Audit

​A complete strategic read of your student's college application materials — the way an admissions committee sees them.

​What's included

• ​Complete review of personal statement, activities list, and supplemental essay drafts

• ​Feedback document with section-by-section strategic commentary

• ​Video walkthrough of the full review

• ​Optional portfolio/creative supplement review

​Materials don't need to be polished. Working drafts are what I expect.

​This is not: line editing, proofreading, or paragraph rewriting. This is the read that tells you what's working, what isn't, and what the most important moves are before you submit.

​$650 Founding Rate (through Labor Day) · $750 Standard Rate (starting September 8) · Async · August 1–December 1 · Delivered within 7 business days

​Cancellation

​Full refund if you cancel before submitting your materials. No refund once I've received your file.